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Review of I Pledge  Open in new Window.
Review by Linzi S Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like it :)
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Review of The Darkness  Open in new Window.
Review by Linzi S Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I like the intentional message of the poem, but it seems that it could have been lost. Towards the middle, it seems that you changed your mind about the direction that you wanted your poem to go. Some of the rhymes seem forced, but I still really like it. I could feel your emotions through the words you used. Poems are about making people feel something. Please continue to write
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