This is a great poem. Its good description. I love the lone "The feeling rages my soul". Id like to see a lot more poems from you. You write great and interesting poems Deshonta. Keeps it up.
I really love this poem because i can relate to this a lot. It has great word choice. Most of peoples first heart break is the worst. Then it messes up there next relationship and it makes it hard on the next boy. Try and love again.
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