This is a very touching poem. You really feel as though your almost watching this scene happening, it gives such great imagery! This poem also has such raw emotion behind it, it really makes you feel for this girl and what she is going through.
Overall this is such a brilliant piece of writing! I really enjoyed this piece. Great job. :)
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