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Review by hongkongking Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
It describes how a conservative female feel inside when she saw her hosue was burning. she did mot do anything. Her feeling changed with the outside world. Her mind changed with the police came, fireman came, and the house ruined.
You can understand how her feel with every different situation.

Its easy understand what she wants to say. You can discover her inner world with outside world. Nothing special but a simple piece of life.
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Review by hongkongking Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The author points out the spirit of cooperation is love. It includes the role of individual and government.
It is a good idea!
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Review by hongkongking Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
It described how people pray for the rain. She also prayed by speaking to the God
That's the way they do.
But she did not tell the result. What she thought of the pray? Was that work?
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Review by hongkongking Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Up to now, I still don't know how to enter your 'Daily Flash Fiction contest'.
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