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Review of Overture.  Open in new Window.
Review by Ms. LorriFish Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my, the line "embryonic work of fiction..." is as clear a picture as I've read or imagined to describe that feeling. A work about to be born. Wonderful!
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Review by Ms. LorriFish Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really liked this poem. It was full of emotion, but not so much as to crowd out the message. It was well written, and I had it accompanied in my head with music. I think it would make a great song.
You wrote 'intergation', it should read 'integration'
Overall, it was quite good. I urge you to keep writing!
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Review of Yesterday  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I found this story entirely captivating, beautifully descriptive and, at times, surprisingly funny. Sarcasm always works for me...
When you wrote of the 'scarred cat' did you mean 'scared'? I feel scarred, intentional or otherwise, lent to the visual effect.
Also, when you first mention the blue flower, you wrote 'pedals'. It should read 'petals'
Overall I loved it. Have now read both of your items and will look for more.
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Review of Immersed  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What an unexpected ending. The amount of information conveyed is impressive, considering the length. It gives the reader a full image of the dire consequences of ones actions, even those that seem small and insignifigant, such as entering a diner. I liked it very much.
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