or is it more deep than what meets the eye..!! I am unable to decide.But would Like to understand from the writer because it is not clear to me what are the intentions of the writer behind this peiece of work.
May be he himself can make things more clear to the users...?
First of all, I liked the theme of the article as I myself think of it many times from different perspectives.Even till today I could not understand the concepts of poems,frankly speaking.
Here are few of my thoughts on it:
1).The only point I see throughout the piece,is fictional writing is broad in its meaning and perspectives as compared to nonfictional writing.There could be many other points for consideration.
2).All the examples are too specific to the knowledge of certain piece of work or in culture.for ex. I am from india..I could not connect to it.
the examples could be chosen from more universal writings for wider audience.
3).The length of overall piece is very small to do any justice with such an important topic.
First of all I really enjoyed this story.It is very creative and fresh in its type I believe.Here the few of my observations:
*I liked the way of using bold and normal font for self talk and funny comments...!!
*I could not decide till end it is more hilarious or more thriller/suspense.I liked this element personally.
*I enjoyed your subtle sense of humor in little small things like "I guess there were six".
All the best... just one comment if you can zip your piece and make it more compact ,its effect would be multiplied.As I believe "less is more"
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