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Review of Fear  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I really enjoyed this poem. It was interesting to read and the imagery was solid. A couple of word choices here and there could be changed in my opinion, but otherwise, it was solid. I really could feel what you were portraying. Thank you for sharing this one with us! I really enjoyed it!
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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I really enjoyed this poem. The format was very cool in my opinion. I can feel the emotion when I read the words. Some simple changes and editing would help, but that's being nit-picky! I really enjoyed this poem, overall. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
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Review of My Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I really like this one. When we read it in class, I enjoyed it, although I'm usually not a huge fan of love poems. The imagery really hit the mark for me. Also, I thought that the word choice had some very good spots. Just a bit more editing would be good, but you can always say that. Overall, a very good poem.
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Review of Lucy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
This was an interesting poem about friendship! A very unique change of pace from the usual themes. I think that this poem could benefit from more "exciting" word choice in certain spots, and more detail is always helpful, but otherwise, I really like it. The theme is solid and I can tell you put effort into a good poem! nice work
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Review of Fabulous  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a pretty solid poem in my opinion. I like the way the format looks and have written some like it for my creative writing class, however I think that it may limit this poem's ability to convey your theme with detail and imagery. You had some good word choice here and there, but I think that it could use some editing here and there. Otherwise, I think your poem really delivered! Thanks for sharing!
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Review by Logan Jackson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
I liked the theme that "My Heart Belongs To You" highlights. I think with work, that this could be a very good poem. My biggest dislike of it was a lack of imagery to describe the heart. If you described the heart in detail, I could picture what it would look like. If brought to life, I think the "physical heart" could signify the brokenness of the narrator's feelings. This is a solid poem as it stands, but I think it could be even better!
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