the first chapter is a good start. I cant wait to finish the whole story. You were able to tell your story in a very vivid way. It seems that we were there or I am just watching a movie or television since it is colorful and seems real. Keep up the good work. I hope to read more from you. :D
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.12 seconds at 5:08pm on Nov 13, 2024 via server WEBX2.