Very interesting, nicely done overall. Although I'm not usually a fan of fan-fic. type writing, I do enjoy the "Lost" TV series, and I think you did a good job here. Really sticks true to it, with revealing characters backgrounds and upholding numerous intense moments, and it kept me hooked.
An interesting blend of short story, poetry, and history that I thoroghly enjoyed. It really gives the reader a good sense of the chivalrous valour of St. George. And not only was it a pleasing poem to read, but it was all done in an acrosstic format that gave it an extra edge of talent.
At times the poetry didn't flow as smoothly as it possibly should have, but I disregarded that considering the story telling influences that make it more than an average poem.
Overall, excellently done!
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