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Rated: E | (3.0)
I understand the sentiment of the poem, all too clearly. A sense of frustration and desperation is expressed, leaving the reader with a sense of desperation also. My recommendation would be to use ! sparingly. Read your poem out loud, as if you were shouting the phrases ending with ! Does it make sense to you? If so, leave them. If not, rethink it. Good luck!
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