Nice use of repetition to create a greater feeling of the yearning the subject feels, and with the variation at the end was a nice touch.
I think I'd say the fact that a lot of it is left to the imagination of the reader also makes it just that bit more powerful, makes it a far more interesting and compelling read.
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