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Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
like this very much reminds me of shel silverstein - the line scarred by a battle to survive - very poignant -
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Review of Zombie  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
so sad but true-lisa
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Review of Humanity's Evil  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
powerful insightful - perhaps the title could have related to the idea of numbers- l
love the statement of people not being linear- excellent work - lisa
perhaps you could reflect on some of my things when you have the chance
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Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
love the flow rain hitting retinas and drops of blood admiring themselves very
creative - excellent lexicon and symbolism -lisa
happy holidays would love some input on my work as well t you
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Review of To My Love  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
like it the cycle of love and discovery and the feeling of loss and return to the state of which you began
if you have a chance could you read some of mine ?regards lisamarie
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Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
like the pacing and the metaphorical comparisons of making choices in relationships and whether or not to continue -
spoke to me for sure as have had to make similar decisions over the past few months - good work

like the revolting spirit urges me line (:

if you have a chance could you look at some of my work
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Review of COLOURS  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
i like the comparisons and metaphorical usages the commas were distracting to the pacing at times - the idea is excellent - good work lisa
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Review of He sells dreams  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
the thought is nice but don't forget to spell check sold- temporary sales are final

keep writing - i like the pace and the idea - lisa
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Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the ideas some of the (punctuations) soemtimes too many
commas can break the flow- should be didn't -
instead of learnt learned -
but i like the refrain and the ideas presented - the feeling of loss and wishing to
return to a chereished moment are universal -keep writing - best wishes lisa
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Review of Brief Encounter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
excellent descriptives had me at the edge of my seat
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Review of A Sirens’ Tale  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
i like the tone - the line towards the shoals the ships careen - keep on writing i can almost hear the waves crashing - lisa
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Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
So touching - I wish every woman had a man who so lovingly cared - and so expressively shared his thoughts - regards lisa
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Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
very warm and simple in timing -
the refrain is nice and the sentiment sincere - lisa
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Review of The Tower  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
very intense and poe - like
excellent what a vocabulary you have !!!
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Review of American Shrines  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
hmm i like the walked on wishing iconoclasm line -
like the descriptives as well kind of hunorous and historical at once
going back and forth in time - and place - good job mister -
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Review of Styrofoam Static  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
The details make one remember the years and stages of life -
it made me tear up a bit and recollect my own boxes,
memories and things to sort - touching - poignant -
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Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Joe - this is good stuff - as a teacher it is true to real life- i would be a milionaire if I counted the times in as month I was told to f- off -
as a person who has been in the midst - with a young son - the chaos of emotions is well described - but you maintain hunor throughout
to keep the reader's attention - bravo - lisa and the parallels between each of you make it even more heartwarming
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Review of STEPSON  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
pretty decent some errors in spelling - keep going -lisa
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Review of The Cortese Bar  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
such excellent descriptives - I can completely visualize your scenes -
very sam shephard like - I can almost hear his voice in a narrative -
i love that expression scared s***less - it cracks me up everytime -l
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Review of Wishful Thinking  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
so creative a compilation of decriptives and childlike eanting and adoration-lisa
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Review of Sinful Chocolate  Open in new Window.
Review by lisamarie Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
very humorous great idea
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