Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: th9is was structured using three stanzas
Theme: The theme was New Year's Resolutions
Flow :The flow waa okay
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Title: The title, "New Years resolution".is taken right out of the poem.
this was a good poem that I really don't have any suggestions for you. This poem just spesks for itself, It is a very well written poem.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Schnujo's Doing NaNoWriMo? I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this is a great look at a character study. You are going to write an interesting story using this background. I think that this is a great idea, I have never done one before, I bet it makes writing a story easier? This is a good plan and I wish you well at writing this.
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Thaou today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a highly emotionally charged poem, I can feel the love in your words.
The title is appropriate for this piece of writing,
The item description tells us that this poem is written for your son. I believe you
should add a quick description of the poem. This is a touching piece of writing, I commend you for it.
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Hello Chris Breva I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you reviewer of this poem. . I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
The title of this item is very appropriate and the item description is very helpful to the reader./ review of this poem. This is a well written poem and I am in agreement with you, A road less traveled is a lovely poem.
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Hello Future Mrs. Boo } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This fire looks so warm and cozy. On New Year's eve. I was curled on the couch, visiting with my mom, and watching the Anderson Cooper Special. I did not party or anything I guess I am just boring. What did you do to bring in 2021.
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Hello Words Whirling 'Round } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I saw this piece of art depicting a man skiing. I have never been skiing sport to conquer, the title is appropriate and I think that the item description is helpful to the reader/ reviewer.
I don't think that I would be a good skier and I figure it is a difficult
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I think that this was a very fast-paced poem and it was very creative. I think that the poem's title is very appropriate for the item and I also think that the item description is helpful to the reader/reviewer. You have created a very good poem.
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Hello LMs❤️BrewinMagic I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from .your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was a wonderfully cool poem that you created, I really enjoyed reading this little poem. The title is appropriate for the item, I also I've think that the item description is helpful to the reader/reviewer. You have created a good poem and you are a good writer, I did so much like your poem.
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Hello đź’™ Carly - aka Joan Watson I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think that you sound so happy while writing this one, I have never heard of this festival before. Where do they gather? The poem is pleasant and I enjoyed reading it. I think the title is very appropriate and I think that you did a good job creating this item.
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Hello đź’™ Carly - aka Joan Watson I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully amusing little poem. It really has an excellent rhythm and the rhyme was also perfect. I liked the subject matter as well./ The title is appropriate for the item. The item description is also very helpful to the reader/reviewer
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This was fun, I look forward to the frosty season. I don't mind winter, Though I don't like that everything dies. I look at winter as a time to rest, after all of the holidays and stuff. just go to the cabinet and pull out a jar of grandma's homemade soup, which she made from vegetables from her own garden and canned herself. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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this is supposed to be a nightmare and it is strange, as they all tend to be.
I think you did a wonderful job creating this piece I feel as if I am a voyeur, watching everything take place. you show a lot of talent in just a few stanzas.
you did a great job with this project.
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your reviewer today is: Lisa Noe
Hello dogpack saving 4premium I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a brief little piece of writing. But it speaks volumes with the warm feelings, it is relatable. I just love it and I think it brings
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of the night alive and I can feel and smell the wonderful fire and the soft blanket. it is a wonderful scene. Thank you for sharitng this piece of beautiful poetry with me.
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Hello nfdarb I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
As usual, you have written a beautiful piece of poetry, it is touching and I see that
this free verse poem comes straight from your heart, I love to feel poetry and look and see a painted picture with your words. The title is appropriate for this poem.
The prompt is adhered to very well, all of the words were used. I can also appreciate the author's note as it is a help to the reviewer.
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I came across this piece on the approved list of raid items.
I thought this was an unusual piece, but I did like it much, The title is appropriate for the item and the Item description is very helpful to the reader.
You did a very fine job creating this piece of writing, I commend you for this.
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THIS IS A REVIEW FROM A Story Poem Contest, IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Title: My Dreams
Author: {seser:littlejohn}
Type: Poetry
Reviewed by: Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering.
Suggestions: I liked what you wrote, but it would read better in a different format I think. like a poem in stanzas. I did not see any mistakes with your writing, I thought that it flowed well with no mistakes with grammar or spelling.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I am sorry it took a little while to revie4w this.. but I had surgery Wednesday And I am having a difficult time recovering. I think this entry is quite beautiful. It may only contain eight lines but it speaks volumes to a believer's heart.
Suggestions: I didn't see any Mistakes. The grammar and spelling were good and it shows a lot of creativity.
Conclusthinkkion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
This was a wonderful piece of writing, I thought that you put a lot of heart and emotion into this poem. I too have a great love of God, only He has
the power to forgive me for my past sins..
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
I saw this on the news feed page as an entry in the Poetry Topic of the Month Contest,
I myself also entered. I just wanted to say your entry was good and it deserved the place
you won. Congratulations.
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Magoo, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary , I would like to wish you also a happy New Year!
This was z very sweet little poem. The title is appropriate and the item description is helpful.
The subject matter of his poem is precious and I liked the way the poem read.
It had good rhyme and rhythm.
The spelling and grammar were good. I liked your little poem and commend you for a poem well written
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello oktchr, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I also would like to wish you and your family a very Happy New Year, lets hope that it is much better than last year. Let's hope the pandemic will be over.
This was a very well written piece of writing, the poem has class, the imagery is great and it also has some alliteration. the title, "Soaring", is appropriate.
You certainly show much talent for being a very good poet. I really did like your poem. Soaring is the type of poem that you can just feel in your soul.. I really do like poetry like this, it is fresh and inspiring.
You can share this poetry with all of us here at Writing.com and I am telling you that we can appreciate your creatif3 and ins0iring work pf art. This poetrey is fresh and new very unique and original.
Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello tank, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this evening, I also hope that you are having a happy New Year! This is a very brief short poem. It is a thought-provoking and very odd poem.
The title, "Wisdom", is very appropriate and helps the reader determine what the poem is all about, I believe it is necessary for you to write a better item description for the poem than the one that you have. You need to describe the poem the best you can, it is very important. I thought that the item is very good.
you tend to say quite a bit about life in very few lines. I think that this is an important poem for people to read. Let us hope that this is a b3tt34 year than the one we had in 2020. it was so very strange and sad so many people became sick and died. I do hope that you have not been affected by this virus.
thank you for sharing this item with me, I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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:poseyv}Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Achilles Asheelz, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary and I also hope you are having a wonderfully happy New Year. I know I am.
It is odd that you write about having a dumb friend. I know I have had a few friends who were so dumb. I would have never thought of creating a poem about it. I guess you can create poems about anything you desire to. I think the poem flows well,
with good spelling and proper grammar. The rhythm of the poem is good and there is a little bit of alliteration within the poem. I enjoyed reading this poem. I wonder if the person that you wrote this poem about knows that you wrote it about them.
The title of this poem is good and appropriate for the item. I can not stand a person who brags and constantly brags about themself. I did like this item it is v3ery good. thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello jonnigrl1, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this evening, I would also like to wish you a very Happy New Year!I love this country and I have been so sad o er the past four years. as our leader has done nothing acce[t create division and spread hate. I look so forward to new leadership. I am sorry if you may be a Trumper, but your poem leads me to think you also want a fresh start. Your poem is very well written and I did enjoy reading it for sure. I thought the title was very appropriate and simple. You show promise as a poet and writer of the human condition. please know If I have insulted you ion any way I surely did not mean to. I think the leadership or lack thereof over the past four years has helped in making the pandemic much worse. we need a mask yet he said we do not. I mean please, he is a person who lacks com[assopn.
s item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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