Thank you for sharing your inner thoughts and feelings here, it is appreciated *smiles*
I like the form of this poem
the ryming is smooth
the stanzas are short sweet and to the point
The one you love has read this; I hope !!
Title>>>
Very Nice, made me wonder what kind of nectar you were going to write about.. love,blood,money, all of these could be seen as sombodys sweet nectar ;)
Form>>>
Nice four lines per stanza
Easy to read
Not too long
Overall opinion>>>
Very well written.
Kept my intrest.
I dont see any idication of force rhyming.
All of your lines made perfect sense :)
Told a nice little story
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