This story kept me wanting to read more and having read to the end, I have questions, and I still want to read more! What happened when the police wanted to talk to you? What did they want? What happened during their investigation? Why wasn't your father concerned more about a flashlight than about you, when you could have been one of the missing?
I hope your continue, I liked this story.
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