I really thought you did a nice job with this story. I liked it alot. Not sure I can give any tips since I'm new at this. Love to see more of your work.
That was really good. I personally liked it alot. I'd like to read anything else you have written, so please let me know. I'm sure he drove his father crazy with the drum set, lol. Keep on writing and never give up! Hope to see your work published some day
I loved it! I think you did a very nice job writing this story. I think you should diffently stick with it and have it published some day. If you are interested in becoming an author, there are free publishing agencies out there. I was just published by PublishAmerica.com. You really don't make much money from them, but they are for first time authors.
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