I can completely relate to this on a personal level. it was beautifully written and im glad I got the chance to be able to read it. looking forward to reading more of your pieces. truly amazing and heart felt piece thank you once again for the read.
really nicely written short story. kept my attention the whole way threw until the end. very interesting dialog and full of great detailed information to the reader. not drawn out but and right to the point. well written and enjoyed every bit of it. thanks for writing and sharing this piece.
really like the lyrics of this song. do you sing? would love to hear it to music one day. have you ever thought about selling your lyrics so someone can sing them for you if not interested in perusing your self? your really good might be a great way to make some money and a career. just a thought. but your really good loved the song.
lots of detail and passion went in to writing this piece. It was very nice to read. it kept my attention and stayed interesting to the very end. was very well written and has a great flow where everything that happens fits together with ease. very nice read thanks for sharing.
what's sad about this is that its so many dogs real outcome. BUT least this dog got away and new what she wanted out of life. a home where she could be treated right and loved. out of everything she went threw and all the feelings that dog had to face she still wanted the love and respect of a human. which in noticing that is the same feelings for every dog around and to some this is exactly what they face. poor creatures. loved reading this happy it had a nice ending and that it shows others who reads this to open there hearts to those with 4 legs.
loved this piece omg, too funny at times, reminding me of many times in my life. picture at the end was a great touch, beautifully written. Has nice flow and feeling in this. lots of detail and well planned out dialog. really was an enjoyable read and kept me entertained right down the very end. very nice piece thank you.
a lot of power and emotions flow in this piece. nicely written with flow. spoke to me on a few different levels and really enjoyed reading this. there is always hope, love and peace in unspoken and spoken words as well as unanswered prayers. We just have to open our hearts and soul and know where to look and when to listen, to our inner self. we always carry the answers and the strength we just don't always know it and often don't listen to our inner soul. loved this piece thanks for the read.
nicely written. enjoyed the punch lines, very well planned out and detailed. made me laugh several times and easy to follow your story. had a really nice flow to it and never a dull moment. kept me intrigued to continue reading and interested to find out the ending. thanks for the awesome read.
it took me a bit to figure out what it said, however I got the just of it. I find it enlightening but in some parts hard to follow. the detail is nice, creates a nice picture that people can see to imagine what you were thinking when writing this piece. very nice flow to it.
I feel as though I'm in a mall possibly walking by a food card and vendors or something. I was caught in the reading made me feel as though I was there, was truly an amazing read thank you for that. it keeps you interested from start to finish.
Omg Loved reading this really touched home base with me. Christmas is my favorite time of year, cause I love throwing snow balls and spending time with family and the kids as well. very nice story well written and kept me interested and intrigued to see what would happen next, so I could continue reading love that in a story.
being a soldier I can relate to this story. I really like the detailed outlook in your writing. I like how it keeps ya interested to the very end and it doesn't drag. you did a really good job in writing this piece, was a very well written and straight to the point story thank you very much for the read.
really nice story. very funny, interesting and really enjoyed reading. Curious where you get your inspirations to write short stories like this? they seemed very detailed and couldn't stop reading for even a min. kept me interested till the very end. thank you very much for the read, was excellent.
I've had these same feelings Nemours of times. cant tell you how hard it is to bottle and try and live a normal life. I can be hurt inside but a smile is what everyone sees your poem really touches home with me and a lot of the same things I write about. really liked reading it and glad I'm not the only one that has these feelings. loved it a lot thank you. really well written.
I really enjoyed this piece of writing very much. What inspires you to write like this?. reading it feels like as if I was there in real life, or maybe the scenes planed out for an action combat video game. Was very well detailed and well thought up. really loved it thank you very much for the read was excellent.
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