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Review of Opposites Attract  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well done!
I loved the flow of words,
The imagery was great!
I could not find anything wrong.
The only thing I see would be some punctuation
Just to give the reader a chance to breath.
Nothing more.
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Review of The Road Home  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
excellent read!
I never would have expected that twist in the end.
Go figure in just a few short paragraphs you turned someone into such a callus human being.
I could not imagine watching someone die in front of me like that.
Great imagery, loved the character.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem actually brought tears to my eyes.
I almost lost my sun last year and he was take from us and he then survived.
I told him very thing. God brought you back for a reason.
You have something that shines.
Your book is not finished. It is your book. You get to write it.
Great job!!
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Review of Priorities  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I totally agree with you on this.
Nice choice of words and you point is getting across very well.
Priorities are different with everyone.
Saving lives would be one of mine.
Hard to do that when we don't have the government backing us up.
The world is upside down right now, and people need to pay attention
to what is important.
Great poem
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Review of The Wolf  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A nice description of a wolf going after his prey.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well written. I really felt the emotions.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was great. I see how you made a comparison to evil and good.
The beauty in the butterfly as well and providing peace.
The caterpillar disgusting and evil.
Well done.
I loved the description.
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Review of Just Chill Out!  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (5.0)
lmao. cute!
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Review of My first love  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Beautiful!
congratulations, not many last too long in a marriage these days.
We are celebrating our 25th in April. Not sure where the time went.
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Review of Not Here Again  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love this piece! I have a friend with a mother in a home. She has Alzheimers disease.
I really felt this. So sad! Thanks for sharing !
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Review of Sensory Words  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have the book of Thesaurus and I hold on to like a bible.
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Review of Passing  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (3.0)
A nice piece.
Although I think you can find a better choice of words, in between these two times
somehow doesn't flow with what you are saying.
Only an opinion.
also I would suggest you use punctuation throughout the poem.
Great start.
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Review of Farewell England  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
One of my travelling dreams is to visit England.
The way you describe is everything I envisioned.
Lovely write
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this story!
The poetic words flowed.
the perfect story told.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very deep!
The words touched me.
People care.
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Review of Healing  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (3.5)
Very nice!
You are right, we always see the light through tough times.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
These are all beautiful!
Poem 2 Love the last two sentences. Grabbed me.
Poem 1 That is when the world breathes again. Very nice!
Great job!
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Review of The Golf Links  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice!
My husband is very eager for this season to begin.
It cant come soon enough !
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Review of Forever Twisted  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
wow! Those are some scary lyrics.
I don't read many lyrics but I noticed you had no title.
Just a thought: FOREVER TWISTED
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice.
This is a form of poetry I really need to practice.
Great!
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Gorgeous !
I feel the love !
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Review of Official January  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
wow!
This was a great read.
I felt like was in a stagnant office just reading that.
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Review of Talking To Myself  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (3.5)
It sounds like a free spirit, trapped and wanting to fly.
Nice imagery.
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Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
aahhh
This is so sweet !
A great to send that perfect message.
There are not enough of romantic daters.
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Review of Titan  
Review by ~Lifelessons~
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nicely done
Great message.
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