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Review of Music  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a great example of an acrostic poem. In just a few sentences, you did a great job expressing your feelings and passions for music. I especially liked the "please play it again?"

The only things I'd like to point out is the first M. Instead of the first word being Mostly, I'd change it into an a noun or adjective. Just as an example I'd say

Melody, All / What I can hear, a
Uni... and so on.

Also, I think it'd have a better sound if instead of "Can you please play it again" I would say "Could you please play it again."

But of course, this is my opinion and I'd say this poem is a great piece! A great, expressive poem. I can relate to your love of the song! Great work, keep writing!

~LifeFinder~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am very impressed with this quiz! Nice work! My results were about 95% accurate. I must say, this quiz is one of the best I've taken about myself as a person. I found the right answer for every question, and the questions were easy to understand. Overall, I think this is a great quiz for someone to know a little more about themselves. Great work my friend *Smile*
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