Hi This was a great story! Your imagery, imagination and perspective was great. The only suggestio I would have would be on your form. It's not awful, but could use a little adjustment. Just a little constructive feedback Other than that, it was fantastic!!
An awesome inspirational write! It makes you really want to embrace the Holiday Season! I loved the uniqueness to this write and most of all....The inspiration the author gives to anyone who has the pleasure of reading this wonderful poem! Another great write.
The author's talent and imagination in this piece is outstanding. I loved every single line! Everything needed to make a great story is here....Imagination, excitement, anticipation....and keeping the reader interested in what you're saying. Very well done; a definite five star write!
I liked this a lot! Your imagery and imagination is wonderful! Your form was great as was your sentence structure. I especially liked the creativity in this piece!! WELL done! I look forward to viewing more of your very talented work!
Your work is amazing! You have great talent and I hope you are thinking about publishing this fantastic piece when it's done! Your chapters are very well written with perfect imagery. You never veer off path or go off on a tangent. It's interesting and easy to stay on track! GREAT work!
WOW! This was an amazing story! I'm a psychology student, so topics as such are VERY interesting to me. You write so very well and your intelligence truly shows with each and every word. I was almost mesmerized when I read this story and wished it hadn't ended (I would have loved to read more). I can't wait to see more of your work!
As a current college student majoring in Psychology, I have seen and written many essays in my days. This essay is absolutely great. Your spelling and grammar is perfect as is the information you've provided. One of the best essay's i've ever read; great work!
AMAZING!!! I liked this one even better than the first! Have you been writing long? Do you write just poetry or do you write other forms? I'm sure you hear this a lot, but you are so talented. I hope to be half the writer you are some day. You're an amazing poet.
This is one of the best poems I have read on here so far. My passion is poetry and I am very young, but I have had a lot of writing classes and you're such an excellent writer. I love this poem and I'm going to look at the rest of your writes, and I'm very excited! Wonderful work!
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This was a great story! Your imagery, imagination and perspective was great. The only suggestio I would have would be on your form. It's not awful, but could use a little adjustment. Just a little constructive feedback