This story was really well written. I love how you talk about grumpy old men and the ones you have met in your lifetime. I to have had a run in with many grumpy old men but most of them have turned out to be nice and polite. Just they seem to be grumpy at first. Your story was worth the read and well worth my time finding it. Thank you for sharing it and hope to be able to read more of your work in the future.
This story was a great one. Great details. Sad made me cry a little bit but it was happy story too. I can not wait to read more of your writings. Thank you so much for sharing it with everyone here. This story is awesome how it goes from the lady being in acoma to her waking up and her husband happy because she doesn't remember them fighting and all before her accident happens.
This was an awesome read and wonderful description used in it. I love bowling and this was a great poem with lots of details and it made sense to me while reading it. Actually has made me want to go out and play a game of bowling. I am lousy at it but I used to be semi good at it. Thank you for sharing this.
This sounds like an awesome and fun time for all that would love to this. I am going to check the site out. i would love to be able to help out and determine what short stories and such would make great movies. I believe this site is well over do. I am so excited to volunteer for this. Thank you for sharing this everyone.
This was good all except for I think when you refer to this is bad what you are thinking you might try to either put this is quotes or make it capitalized or even just bold it. I also think you might capitalize the gforces when you mention this. Great job. This describes how I feel most of the time.
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