Be careful what you wish for, you might just get it. Getting what you've always wanted can be a good thing. It opens the door to many interesting possibilities. At the same time, getting what you've always wanted can be a bad thing. There are always consequences to be considered.
Regardless of the extent of the disaster, 9/11 is event which must be remembered. An event which thought everyone who remained many lessons, lessons which must be understood and put into effect.
To do otherwise is to ignore the past. To ignore the past is to allow history to repeat itself.
Cute, interesting, cute. Someone definitely has an interesting sense of humor. I for one didn't think it was possible to write a funny poem about canned cheese. You have a lot of potential as a writer. But it begs the question, were did you get the inspiration for this piece of fiction? A package of cheese slices? Well Done!!!
When you combine Martin Mystery and weight gain, it has to be extreme. And by extreme, I mean EXTREME!!! From what I've read so far, Martin will have to check into the Center if and when he wants to go on a diet. All in all, an excellent premise and follow through.
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