Very intriguing! I'm hooked in! The only read problem I saw was that your spelling was off in a few places and the grammar needed some work but those are easily fixable! I really liked your opening description of the world around Kaz. I was able to really visualize the horrors he was thrown into! Can't wait to read another installment! Keep writing!
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