The poem was ok and I liked the wording in the line "The Lord grants true caring
with rare gifts and flowers". But other than that I didn't really like it. Love is a really over played topic in today's poetry. Many poems are ruined when rhyming is included, but I liked the use of rhyming in yours like in the lines "But love, you’re a vision" and "our hopes, our decision"
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