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Review of Mistress  Open in new Window.
Review by lauren. Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
I don't really like the way this is written or the word choice being used. The stanzas also do not flow, but i like the feeling that was put into your writing.
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Review of Scared Of Love  Open in new Window.
Review by lauren. Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed this poem and I connected with it. I do love the way you chose to write the stanzas and it flows well. I do believe this poem could use improvement with the diction, but other than that I really liked it.
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Review by lauren. Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I like the emotion put into this poem, but I don't see how the first stanza where you're talking about the rocking chair beginning to move connects with the rest of your lines. Overall, I did like this poem, and the word choices as well. I would also try to make it where the words flow more as you're transitioning into the next stanza.
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Review of Pieces  Open in new Window.
Review by lauren. Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The last two lines were my favorite out of this poem. The word choice is nice, but I would try to be more descriptive on the topic you're writing about.
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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
Review by lauren. Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Overall, I like the topic and the way it's written. Although, I think the diction could be touched up on to improve this poem.
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