It's really hard to review poetry but I can give you my opinion. I thought it was wonderfully weird. Sometimes it seemed to wander into extreme weirdness that I didn't really understand but maybe that's the point. I like the continual reference back to frogs and think there's a nice hark back to fairytales and the kissing of frogs. Is your narrator a frog herself? I imagine her kissing the gardener's son and transforming into a human.
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