This is a surprisingly simple yet creative interactive. While the idea of Jaune being turned into a girl is fun enough, I like that you went the extra yard and gave various methods to cause the change. As well as not limiting the story to only RWBY girls.
This is a pretty cool idea for an interactive. I like that there are various ways to change, allowing for different levels of interaction for the readers/writers.
While there doesn't seem to be that many chapters as of yet, I look forward to seeing more.
A rather dark but creative idea to have one of our heroes (or villains) taking over the world. While I expected the second choice to be from the hero's point of view, I actually found myself enjoying the idea that we're following one of the slaves instead.
This is a surprisingly simple but fun idea of an interactive. The idea of creating a small change that will have a Butterfly Effect on the world as a whole allows for creative ideas and outcome.
Despite that, there sadly doesn't seem to be many chapters. K hope that changes.
A really fun and enjoyable story. I liked Tom and saw a bit of myself in him. He was (from what I can tell) an accurate and respectful interpretation of autism.
Lenny was also a well written character. Typical buddy cop duo who cover each other's weaknesses. It makes me want to see more of him and hope he made a full recovery.
This is a simple, yet interesting, interactive idea you've thought up. Giving people the chance to make a story of their OC getting a RWBY girl as their girlfriend is a fun idea. I'm surprised I don't see other interactives like this on the site.
First, I'd like to apologise for my contributions to have diminished. This has been a fun interactive to read, as well as add to. Giving so many different ways of control allows for a great number of ideas and contributions.
Suggestion: In your introduction, perhaps you could remove all crossed out details to make it a little less packed? I would also suggestion putting each series name in bold, so to make it stand out. This would allow people to find each section easier.
This is a weirdly fun and interactive to both read and add to. While more erotic additions are slightly easier to think of for the challenges, it'll be intresting to see how those erotic challenges are done. As well as any physical and intellectual challenges that may come.
This has been an extremely fun interactive to help add chapters go. While this isn't usually the sort of thing I tend to work with, it's pushed me into thinking differently than I normally would about the characters and their interactions.
I hope others eventually add to it, and that I get new ideas to add.
None of them really, because I'm a surprisingly adaptable person. However, if I had to choose, it would have yo be Tellitubies. But only because the world makes the least sense.
Wow, apparently I'm in the majority. First time for everything.
My personal favourite pokémon has to be Eevee because of its ability to evolve into so many different types, therefore it can become whatever your team needs. Too bad Flareon's states don't match its move set, from what I've heard from experts anyway.
I personally think this is a good premise with some clever options. The different possibilities for what the app is capable of leads to some interesting ideas. However, if there's one thing that kills it for me, it's the sudden dead ends. I'm going down a path when I suddenly find no more chapters, not even options to continue.
I quite like this interactive. Not only does it give you a base for getting a harem, as well as many methods to obtain said harem, but it also give you the option to obtain fictional girls as well. The only problem I can find is that due to how many choices you're given, you have to slog through the options to find the path you want. And even then, that's not much of a complaint.
Honestly, I don't really know what I expected. The title had me interested "The Weight of a Trainer", I was curious wwhat that meant. Maybe it was about responsibility? Like "the weight of the world"? But then I learned it was about fat gain. I don't have anything against it (apart from how unhealthy it is) and was willing to give it a try. The problem is, it is only about weight gain. So you get what you asked for, but not really much else.
Well, that was an interesting development. The way the genie explained it, she just had to imagine what she wanted, and it would happen. I was not expecting that just thinking of something would also cause reality to shift. The fact her power made her as large literally as she dreamt of being metaphorically was an interesting twist.
I fail to understand why this pathway up and ended after only ten chapters. Beyond that, the way that this chapter is laid out isn't very clear on if it is supposed to continue or not. We'll, clearly sonicbattler intended to end the story here, but it definitely could have continued.
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