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Rated: E | (5.0)
Personally, I love Sally Acorn. I've never read any of the comics, so I cant judge her by that. But in Sonic SatAM, I love how she was portrayed as Sonic's equal. What Sonic does with speed, Sally can do with intelligence and preparation. I hope she returns one day.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very difficult for me, because I love both colours equally. To be honest, I'd love if you made one with both, or made the two with each wolf on opposite sides. Like they were facing each other.

Choosing randomly, I chose black because it fit with the night.
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Review of Dragon Poll  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
With no real idea of what I'd be adopting, I don't know which I'd pick. How big will it get? How much trouble will it be? Will it be stressful, or relaxing?

That being said, I'll have to adopt the Rainbow Dragon. Not only because it's the name of a Yu-Gi-Oh monster, but also because I love colourful things.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I would personally go for "Disease plus Nature" idea. The idea that even dragons get sick isn't done too often, and it would work to show how even dragons have their limits.

It would also be interesting to learn more about his father. Is he the god of all nature, or just the dragon god of nature?

Good luck with your book.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm Welsh. And as a proud Welshman, I need to follow the lead of Dragon Goch. May he rest in peace.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Pokemon: Used to love the series, but lost intrest after Sinnoh. Season by season, it got worse and worse.

Digimon: Absolutely fantastic. Love every series, but prefer the first two.

Yu-Gi-Oh: Not too bad. Can watch any series, but GX is my fav.

Bayblade: Never seen.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Pyrah Nikos, hands down. Pyrah is the only person he should be dating because he treats her right, and she treats him right.

Some may think the he should date Weiss Shnee, but he wants to date her for all the wrong reasons. Not to mention, she doesn't seem ready for a relationship.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a surprisingly simple yet creative interactive. While the idea of Jaune being turned into a girl is fun enough, I like that you went the extra yard and gave various methods to cause the change. As well as not limiting the story to only RWBY girls.
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Review of RWBY TG  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a pretty cool idea for an interactive. I like that there are various ways to change, allowing for different levels of interaction for the readers/writers.

While there doesn't seem to be that many chapters as of yet, I look forward to seeing more.
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Review of Life As a Slave  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
A rather dark but creative idea to have one of our heroes (or villains) taking over the world. While I expected the second choice to be from the hero's point of view, I actually found myself enjoying the idea that we're following one of the slaves instead.
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Review of Rwby what if  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a surprisingly simple but fun idea of an interactive. The idea of creating a small change that will have a Butterfly Effect on the world as a whole allows for creative ideas and outcome.

Despite that, there sadly doesn't seem to be many chapters. K hope that changes.
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Review of Lift Me Up  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A really fun and enjoyable story. I liked Tom and saw a bit of myself in him. He was (from what I can tell) an accurate and respectful interpretation of autism.

Lenny was also a well written character. Typical buddy cop duo who cover each other's weaknesses. It makes me want to see more of him and hope he made a full recovery.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a simple, yet interesting, interactive idea you've thought up. Giving people the chance to make a story of their OC getting a RWBY girl as their girlfriend is a fun idea. I'm surprised I don't see other interactives like this on the site.

Thank you for creating this.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
First, I'd like to apologise for my contributions to have diminished. This has been a fun interactive to read, as well as add to. Giving so many different ways of control allows for a great number of ideas and contributions.

Suggestion: In your introduction, perhaps you could remove all crossed out details to make it a little less packed? I would also suggestion putting each series name in bold, so to make it stand out. This would allow people to find each section easier.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a weirdly fun and interactive to both read and add to. While more erotic additions are slightly easier to think of for the challenges, it'll be intresting to see how those erotic challenges are done. As well as any physical and intellectual challenges that may come.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This has been an extremely fun interactive to help add chapters go. While this isn't usually the sort of thing I tend to work with, it's pushed me into thinking differently than I normally would about the characters and their interactions.

I hope others eventually add to it, and that I get new ideas to add.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Looney Toons, Scooby Doo, and Powerpuff Girls. In that order.

While I enjoy the more serious stuff, like superheros, I much prefer something where I can just turn my brain off and laugh my lungs out.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dog. I've had fish, a bird, even a hamster, but I've had dogs the most. I can't even name them all.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Of all of these, Krystal would be my choice. But with "Different lady" being an option, I have to choose that because Samus Aran is my Waifu.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Not into vore all that much, find it a little disturbing.

Despite that, if I was to choose, tail bore and hair bore seem the most appealing to me. Between the two, I'd personally have to go with hair vore.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm curious how many people voted "Europe" are from different countries. Russia, Austria, Poland, Wales, etc.

Living in Europe myself, it's always easy for me to forget how easy it is to lump us all into one big continent.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was trapped between Justice Leauge and RWBY. I went Justice League because I love DC that little bit more.

Personally though, I'd love to see Naruto in my universe because I'm curious how far is powers would go with the Laws of Physics that exist.
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Review of Worst Kids Show  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
None of them really, because I'm a surprisingly adaptable person. However, if I had to choose, it would have yo be Tellitubies. But only because the world makes the least sense.

Wow, apparently I'm in the majority. First time for everything.
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Review of Favourite Pokemon  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
My personal favourite pokémon has to be Eevee because of its ability to evolve into so many different types, therefore it can become whatever your team needs. Too bad Flareon's states don't match its move set, from what I've heard from experts anyway.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A short, fun read. Had to stop reading at the pizza part, it was that funny.

Ending reminded me of Thunderbirds with how well known she is.
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