I REALLY loved this story! I got myself enveloped in it, and I couldn't wait to read all of it. One can tell you are a very good writer, and i just got to say the imagery was amazing! You are such a talented writer! =)
This is a really good story, and i love the humor at the end, it was really cute! I love how the story seems believeable, and how it has a message is good to. I would just suggest that you make it more clear in the begining where the recollection ends and she is back in the present.
I really like the poem, but i just didn't feel any wow factor in the pome. I'm so sorry you had to go to a funeral, loss is hard for all of us. I love the message of the poem, and i hope you keep writng!
L.S.Writher
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