Dear author,
I really enjoyed this read it is really good and I don't know if you meant too but im sure you did the color effect as it gets deeper in and darker within the read I do think that revising around some of the words or changing some will help the flow of it but I really enjoyed it it was good I see a lot of potenti in this piece
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