Having just watched "What dreams may come" starring Robin Williams, I find some of the story very familiar sounding. Of course this is the common story in our culture. "Ghost Whisperer" the tv show or the ending of the Harry Potter series. Death and going to heaven are often portrayed as in this story. I like the humour and believe the story could be expanded but isn't big on originality. Funnier and more detail would be my two suggestions.
Overall I enjoyed reading the story.
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