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Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i dont care for the coloring but i really like the words. this poem has a lot of emotion in it and has a reallly good format for it and i like how a little bit of it rhymes.but the coloring is really throwing me off
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Review of Black Hole  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
this poem is very short but i can really feel some emotion in this. it is simple but i like it and enjoyed it. i like the very last line because it just sticks out to me. good job on this poem and good format chosen.
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Review of DELUSIONAL  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
this story is kind of intense and i really like it and enjoyed it. i can tell you put a lot of thought into this and it came out very well. the only thing i really want to critic is the no indentions that were there. that was the main thing i did not like. good job
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Review of My Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
there are a couple weird capitualizations in there but the format fits this poem very well. i enjoyed the read and at first i felt like it was a mom but found the it was your nanny. thank you for sharing this
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Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i feel like different punctuations are needed but this poem flows quite well and i think that this poem is good. everything comes back to you the moment you want to rest and that never ceases to happen. so in a way, this poem is relatable to me. i think that the shortness works well
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Review of Love Despised  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
this poem is really relatable to me. you did a great job displaying what you wanted to say and i can feel the emotion in this. i have had similar situations or know of similar situations. the title goes amazing with this poem to.
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Review of Remember When  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
this is a very sweet poem that makes me think about Christmas and joy even though some of it seems sad. i really enjoyed the format you wrote with. rhyming goes good with Christmas to me
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Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
well, this was very....interesting
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Review of Surprise!  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
nice twist with the dude
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Review of expensive repair  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
it really needs some punctuation and quatations
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Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
i think that you should write this a bit differently so that its not as choppy
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Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
this kind of confuses me with the way that it is written and everything. i see what you were getting at but i feel as if it would come across better if it were just written differently
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Review of Homecoming  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a very interesting story. i never would have even guessed that she was really a he and you did an amazing job
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Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i enjoy this story but there are a few areas that need some punctuation and a few other punctuation errors. but it is a good story
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Review of Lovebirds  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
the one question i have is: are they going to get together? the lovebirds make me think that. but it is an enjoyable story to me
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Review of Silver Beach  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a very beautiful story and it deserves to have won
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Review of The Cheater  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
well, this story makes sense but isnt really exciting. its sort of....bland. its good but i just wish it was a little deeper
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Review of Sally  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
i enjoyed this story but its topic is overused. however, its written very well and i love what you chose to write but the mini mart insident seems a little choppy like somethings missing.
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Review of Blank  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
i understand what you are talking about but it seems kind of bland. i would have loved for more to be there and for the title to be something else besides blank. im not saying its a bad title... i also think that better word choices would have helped this poem to. but its a good poem
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Review of unknow  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
instead of putting coop i think you should have put cooped and i think that you need more in this poem. it doesnt flow very smoothly but i understand what you were talking about a little bit...
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Review of Love Like That  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
i reallly like the last seven lines. but i think that this was an overall extraordinary poem. it may have been simple but who cares. this poem was really great. good job and please continue to write.
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Review of The Night Savior  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
it has a really good story. i am sorry you had to go through all that if its real and im glad you were able to have somebody that helped you. this poem flows nice to. good job.
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Review of Heart Condition  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
i really love the last stanza and i just wish that you used more detail and more picture. but good job and im sorry this happened.
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Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
wow. i really really love this poem. i personally do not see anything wrong with this and my only thing i have to say is that you need to keep writing.
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Review of Aggravation  Open in new Window.
Review by bluebash Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i enjoy this poem but i think that it will work better if you ended at loss instead of lost. but other than that, good job allison
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