i dont care for the coloring but i really like the words. this poem has a lot of emotion in it and has a reallly good format for it and i like how a little bit of it rhymes.but the coloring is really throwing me off
this poem is very short but i can really feel some emotion in this. it is simple but i like it and enjoyed it. i like the very last line because it just sticks out to me. good job on this poem and good format chosen.
this story is kind of intense and i really like it and enjoyed it. i can tell you put a lot of thought into this and it came out very well. the only thing i really want to critic is the no indentions that were there. that was the main thing i did not like. good job
there are a couple weird capitualizations in there but the format fits this poem very well. i enjoyed the read and at first i felt like it was a mom but found the it was your nanny. thank you for sharing this
i feel like different punctuations are needed but this poem flows quite well and i think that this poem is good. everything comes back to you the moment you want to rest and that never ceases to happen. so in a way, this poem is relatable to me. i think that the shortness works well
this poem is really relatable to me. you did a great job displaying what you wanted to say and i can feel the emotion in this. i have had similar situations or know of similar situations. the title goes amazing with this poem to.
this is a very sweet poem that makes me think about Christmas and joy even though some of it seems sad. i really enjoyed the format you wrote with. rhyming goes good with Christmas to me
this kind of confuses me with the way that it is written and everything. i see what you were getting at but i feel as if it would come across better if it were just written differently
i enjoyed this story but its topic is overused. however, its written very well and i love what you chose to write but the mini mart insident seems a little choppy like somethings missing.
i understand what you are talking about but it seems kind of bland. i would have loved for more to be there and for the title to be something else besides blank. im not saying its a bad title... i also think that better word choices would have helped this poem to. but its a good poem
instead of putting coop i think you should have put cooped and i think that you need more in this poem. it doesnt flow very smoothly but i understand what you were talking about a little bit...
i reallly like the last seven lines. but i think that this was an overall extraordinary poem. it may have been simple but who cares. this poem was really great. good job and please continue to write.
it has a really good story. i am sorry you had to go through all that if its real and im glad you were able to have somebody that helped you. this poem flows nice to. good job.
wow. i really really love this poem. i personally do not see anything wrong with this and my only thing i have to say is that you need to keep writing.
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