I actually rather liked this. Very good point, we will never know how another life would be, and although we can dream about it all day long, it won't ever help us. My only advice would be to proofread this and fix grammar mistakes. It was very distracting to me in the beginning and I almost didn't read this. I'm glad I did though. Other than that, love it.
Just realized that you reviewed my first work. Glad I could return the favor :)
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