Deplorable. Miserable. Insulting. Three words that ring in my head with this chapter. 86 chapters leading up to this one, and you can’t put any more effort than 2 sentences? Many chapters of character building, countless time put into it by the original two writers, and they get this. The only saving grace I can see is that you attempted to help continue the story, but you did it in the worst possible way. No character design, nothing from previous chapters, just an empty two sentences. I wish I could give a better review, but sadly, you fell into the same pitfalls as I’ve heard of from Preferred Writers, most of whom write with such atrocious grammar, story and pace that nobody can actually read it. At least you attempted to use grammar.
A/N: It’s about time people started leaving honest reviews. I’m starting that trend now, if possible. Sorry you had to be the first, but I was anticipating this kind of idea since Embo stoke the Belt, and I got nada for it. Sorry again about being so negative, but I’m very upset about it. And you’re not getting the brunt of it. The guy before you is. Good luck in the future!
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