Not bad. It was sad and beautiful, but that's probably just my morbid side. I enjoyed reading it. Brought back some old memories, so with that said you succeeded in captivating and creating a vivid image in your reader. Keep up the writing, and think happy thoughts :)
Very nice verse! I loved the use of creative adjectives. I hope your teacher or professor gave you a fair grade because that was wonderful! Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much for the gifted points. I love this website! Its got to be the best place for writers to express themselfs and have a great opportunity to connect with other aspiring authors. I've read some pretty amazing literature over the past day or so and I must say thank you to everyone out here for taking the time to share their talents with the world. Keep up the amazing work everyone, and thank you again for the gift!
Wow! That was a wonderful story. And a pretty good idea for boosting a child's confidence. Thank you so much for writing this, its truly inspirational.
Simply incredible. I can relate to pretty much all of that and I hope you realize how much more you will get out of life once you can love yourself. I hope you find all you seek in life, and keep up the writing too. I havent wrote in almost a decade because of my similar past and i must say it is a wonderful outlet. As well as a great tool to reflect and inspire yourself and others. Keep up the good work! and "Write On!" or so they say.
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