1. What attracted you to read this piece? The subject matter (Very Interesting and falls perfectly into the type of fictional writing I do.)
2. How striking/meaningful was the first line? Not sure if it is overly relevant with a thesis, but it was very good anyways.
3. Was there a strong enough hook on page one? This was written extremely well and held my interest through every single line.
4. Did the content/plot interest you? Absolutely!
5. How well were the Characters developed? N/A
6. Were there a lot of typos and grammatical errors? None
7. How well were the Chapters and Parts structured? N/A
8. Were the chapters too long or too short for the type of piece? N/A
9. Does the author have a pleasant and consistent voice? yes
10. Would you buy this piece if you found it in a book store? With out doubt. In fact, I was wondering if I could print it out and play off on some of your writings in my fictional work?
This is absolutely awesome. It fits so well with the type of fictional writing I do and with my own personal beliefs.
I think this poem is wonderfully written. I am a fan of fantasy, dragons and such. This poem really reads well; it flows perfectly to me; and it's message is clear, unlike so many poems I've read lately that seam to be so cryptic, even I, a theological mystery thriller novelist can't figure them out. VERY good job. This deserves to be published. I will be checking out the Dragon Rises.
1. What attracted you to read this piece? It was sponsored and sounded interesting.
2. How striking/meaningful was the first line? It worked well and kept me reading.
3. Was there a strong enough hook on page one? Absolutely. Very well written.
4. Did the content/plot interest you? Yes.
5. How well were the Characters developed? Well enough for such a short piece.
6. Were there a lot of typos and grammatical errors? None at all that I found.
7. How well were the Chapters and Parts structured? N/A
8. Were the chapters too long or too short for the type of piece? N/A
9. Does the author have a pleasant and consistent voice? Yes
10. Would you buy this piece if you found it in a book store? Yes
This is the only story I have read so far on Writing.com that I have rated with 5 stars. I think it is brilliantly written and really help my attention. I loved it!
This was written well. I really got the sense of the dream. Reminds me of some crazies I've had in the past. Dreams can really be screwed up, can't they. I should try and write out some of the dreams I've had. Might make a good story. Thanks for sharing. =)
Keith
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