Hey there I know its just the prologue but still you got it to the point where it nails me to my seat. Especially the last sentence that was a catcher. Your writing is really good too, you could make it contain a bit more well.. drama but all in all it's awesome, well as I said it's only the prologue. Keep up the good work
Sincerely Kittie
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