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Review of Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is so cute, short but sweet! I loved it! Keep on writing....
Blessings, Susan
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem really touched my heart and soul, my son has Cerebral Palsy and Epilepsy and feels out of place a lot other then with me or some of his uncle's. I was tearfully reading this and can tell you it is AWESOME for someone to write this out from their heart. Thank you for sharing this very well written poem. I hope you share more, continue writing from the heart. God Bless!
Susan
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Review of Sunday  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What an awesome poem to read.... my thoughts ran right to Jesus! Some will find it differently, but as for me it was Jesus. I can only say this was breathtaking for me.....Keep on Writing and sharing! Blessings to you.
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Review of Greg's Song.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a very emotional and touching story. It made me visualize what was happening as you told your story. It is so heart breaking to lose a loved one. I am glad that you were there to hold his hand and sing his song. I pray that he is in heaven among the angels.
Blessings In Christ,
Susan
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Awesome story! Blessings to you.

Susan
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very pretty. You are very talented. Keep up the great work!

Blessings In Christ,

Susan
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this amusing tale. It caught my attention at the very start. Keep on writing!
Blessings,
Susan
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Review of poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I can understand the way you must have felt when you wrote this. It is heart wrenching. I hope you feel much better now. Keep on writing! It is great therapy for the soul.
Blessings,
Susan
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
First, I would just like to tell you that Religion is MAN MADE. The bible that I read does not give you anything BUT Choices! You can either chose to believe or you can chose not to believe.
Secondly, I feel very sorry for those who DO NOT believe. You will never no true happiness without knowing what GOD has done for us.
Thirdly, Lucifer believed in himself also, which caused his fall from HEAVEN. He also had that I,me, mine, attitude. I truely hope that you allow your children to make their own choices. Children only learn what they live.
Last but not least, I was also raised Catholic and as I got older I realized that I didn't AGREE with all Catholic beliefs. I didn't want to go to church for someone to tell me how to live my life. My attitude was similar to yours but then I realized that we all need to be accountable for what we chose to say or do in our lives. Ezekiel 18:20 It took me many years down the road to ask Jesus to come into my heart. I found out that he is the way. If you are having issues about the Bible, you need to go to THE someone who will listen,Jesus! John 3:16 will explain to you how much God loves us.
I will pray that your heart becomes soften so that the Holy Spirit will enter and you will learn Our Fathers will in your life.
I would also just like to tell you if you need to talk to someone, you can e-mail me and I will be glad to write you back.
May you find Our Father, Son, and Holy Spirit within your heart. In Jesus Name, Amen!
Blessings,
Susan
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written! I really enjoyed reading this. Keep on writing.
Blessings,
Susan
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Review of They  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is very nicely written. I hope you get this published into a song. Keep on writing!
Blessings,
Susan
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Review of Daddy's Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is so hard to lose a parent, hang in there! I enjoyed reading your feelings about your dad. Cancer is a nasty disease and I HATE it! I have also lost people I loved to Cancer. Your dad is Home and someday you will see him again.
Blessings,
Susan
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Review of Bones  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thanks for sharing your feelings this way. Poetry is a great expressive way to show how someone truely feels. This is very well expressed about your loved one. I know how it feels to lose someone. Keep on writing!
Blessings,
Susan
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Review of The voice of God  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is not a bad poem. I just didn't understand one line: You won’t always hear him... because through the poem you are saying you can always hear God. You may want to think about this and change that one
line. Otherwise this is a beautiful poem. Keep on writing...
Blessings,
Susan
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Review of Beautiful  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First off, I would like to tell you how much I like your name, Dream Weaver! I would like to know if you thought of this name by the song or from something else?
This is a very sad poem. I hope you feel a lot better now. I do enjoy reading peoples thoughts on life and their experiences. I have had my own depressing thoughts at times. Keep on writing it is great therapy.
God bless,
Susan
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this, it reminded me of the people I work with who has to keep watch at night. They are security guards for a gated community. I guess you will find many people who find this to fit their lives somehow. Keep on writing!
God bless,
Susan
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Review of Missing You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
nicely written! sorry for your loss.
God bless,
Susan
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was very creative thinking for someone who couldn't sleep! Great job!
Susan
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Review of Grace.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
God is Awesome. This is very well written and creative. It is also true. I really hope that those that do not believe can look at this and see how much God loves us so much. His grace is so important to all of us. Keep on writing for Jesus!
God bless,
Susan
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is funny and very creative. My son listens to Weird Al and he is so funny with the things he writes. Keep on writing....

God bless,
Susan
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Review of Confused.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is cute, I feel like this sometimes. I can relate. Hopefully, there won't be many days like this.
Keep on writing......

God bless,
Susan
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Review of The Carpenter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nicely written! How Great Thou Art! Keep on writing for Jesus.
God bless
Susan
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is a good start of your writing ability. It is only my opinion, but you may want to make this flow alittle better when people read it. I hope you don't take this the wrong way. Keep on writing!
Susan
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Review of The Best of Times  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is beautiful, I really enjoyed reading it. It is so true what you wrote at the end. Keep on writing.

Susan
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Review of Torment: Mosquito  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
LOL I love it.
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