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Review of Loose Teeth  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really didn't expect the twist at the end. You've written a neat little short story, here. I feel like the father is a well-rounded character, and although the focus should remain on him I can't recall a single detail about his wife or brother. The action was a little awkward in paragraph three. Overall, good job.
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