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#2530816

Review of Can You Hear Me Now?

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Thank you very much for this write.It came when I needed it the most.I think the Lord was speaking to me threw you.It hasraised my spirits up when I was down.Keep on writing.

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#2515860

Review of The Day Angels Cried...

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

This one brings back lots of memories.It was a sad day when this happened.I remember it so well.I cried and still cried as I read your poetry.It is a nice tribute to Di.I think the angels did cry for her as we all did that day.You did a great job.Write on!!

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#2515406

Review of Baby Grows Up

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

This is really nice.It is a good poem.It sounds like what my daughter went thru.In the second line the word (come)should be comb.And you need to space it out into paragraphs.I can remember going thru the same thing as a child growing up.Keep Writing.

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#2491874

Review of Bleeding Through

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

This is a really nice story.I felt the pain they felt at loosing their child.I would like to read more of your story.It ended with me wanting to know more.You did a very good job at it.But the word at the end ,(Deal).Looks like there could be another word to use besides that.But it doesn't take away from this great story.

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Review of PATIENTLY WAITING

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

This is a great story.About had me crying to.Would have loved to see some names to it instead of "Man","Women".And I would love to here the rest of your story when you write it.I hope you are going to add more to this story.Good job.Keep up the good work.

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#2378120

Review of Pure Beauty

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Very good.Forgotten beauty is hard to think about after you have past it when you are older.I can see what you were thinking there.I think all women think about the times when they had that beauty and took it for granite when they had it.Then it was to late.I ove your work here.

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#2378060

Review of THE MIDNIGHT HOUR

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

You are a great poet.I love this poem.Makes you feel how the author feels.The lonelyness.Great work.Keep it up.