Thank you very much for this write.It came when I needed it the most.I think the Lord was speaking to me threw you.It hasraised my spirits up when I was down.Keep on writing.
This one brings back lots of memories.It was a sad day when this happened.I remember it so well.I cried and still cried as I read your poetry.It is a nice tribute to Di.I think the angels did cry for her as we all did that day.You did a great job.Write on!!
This is really nice.It is a good poem.It sounds like what my daughter went thru.In the second line the word (come)should be comb.And you need to space it out into paragraphs.I can remember going thru the same thing as a child growing up.Keep Writing.
This is a really nice story.I felt the pain they felt at loosing their child.I would like to read more of your story.It ended with me wanting to know more.You did a very good job at it.But the word at the end ,(Deal).Looks like there could be another word to use besides that.But it doesn't take away from this great story.
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This is a great story.About had me crying to.Would have loved to see some names to it instead of "Man","Women".And I would love to here the rest of your story when you write it.I hope you are going to add more to this story.Good job.Keep up the good work.
Very good.Forgotten beauty is hard to think about after you have past it when you are older.I can see what you were thinking there.I think all women think about the times when they had that beauty and took it for granite when they had it.Then it was to late.I ove your work here.
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