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Review of Forgotten Values.  Open in new Window.
Review by KimE Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed reading this. The imagery and metaphors are great. I love the lines, "The self hatred for yourself pushes through." And the ending lines too. I understand where this story is coming from. Great Write!
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Review of Rearranged  Open in new Window.
Review by KimE Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed reading this. I love the times you've used. It's funny along with good imagery. Thanks for sharing!
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Review by KimE Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this entry. Just being a teacher alone is tough. After reading this and knowing what you did for those kids-its wonderful! I grew up in a church too, never attended VBS but still it sounds fun. I love how you added quotes and bible verses. Just something, when you add quotes, make sure to put the quotation marks from begining to end. Great Write!
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Review of LGBTQ+  Open in new Window.
Review by KimE Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this. It's straight to the point. It's true. The last line made me chuckle. Good Write!
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Review of Oh, pants!  Open in new Window.
Review by KimE Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again,

I'm not a professional writer or anything like that level yet. But I like to give my input if that's okay.

I do like reading your flash fiction. This story made me laugh a bit. I got a full sense of where the character was and its purpose. The ending kind of threw me off. I get its a bit of a twist with the name and pants. Question, the bold font at the end, who is asking that question? And why everyone was calling him Jimmy?


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Review by KimE Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello,

I enjoyed this flash fiction. It was simple and showed just a small glimpse of a moment. And yet had a lot of meaning. I loved it. Great Write!


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Review by KimE Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I thought this poem was very loving. It touched all my senses and it had a nice flow to it. No breaks. I really enjoyed it. Great Write!
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