Hello tylerhess
Wow! This story grabbed me from line one. I saw no errors to speak of which would distract from the story itself. As always Tyler you writing pulls me in from the first line.
Great job with this. I would really like to see you open up a blog on WDC.
The part that most impacted me in this story was:
"God places people in our lives in order for us to use them for a certain amount of time. Whether it's a new-found friend that's there every night for a couple of weeks, a father for half of your life, or a girlfriend for a couple of years, they are there for a purpose. You may not see the purpose now, or ever, but just remember their footprints, and their hand prints, will be forever imprinted on your heart."
How true that is. I'm so looking forward to reading more of your work. It was so good to talk to you also!
Once again your poetry shines through and through my dearest sister. How I've missed reading your work. No errors were noted (not a surprise there, lol) . So good to be back on WDC once again and be reunited with my wonderful friends. Looking forward to catching up on all your recent work since I've been gone!
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