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Review by Kellie Deanne Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is really good!!:) A few spelling and grammar errors but still good. I think some people would like to know what happened from the time they arrived in Tanara to the time they where attacked but that's your choice. It would be great if you wrote more on the story, I think it would turn out great!:)
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was good, it really had me going! I was not expecting the end to be a joke!:)
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That was really good, a few typos but good!!!
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