Once upon a time there was a leaf. Everyday, her friends would fall from the tree. One day, she realized that she was the last leaf on the tree. Because of that, she was worshiped by the other leaves as their Goddess of Endurance and Queen of Grace. Until finally, she fell from her twig and dwelt with her people at last.
Nice! Especially with how it was written within the space of 24 hours, I am impressed. I have tried writing poetry before, failed miserably, then found it easier to write it if I wrote it to music, so I started writing songs instead. I knew where I was going with this a little bit ago....... anyway I enjoyed this. Thanks for posting!
Wow. This is quite the story. I am very interested now, and I will most likely be contributing at some point. The concept of a human being shrinking down is a very unusual one, to say the least, not to mention the amnesia. I like it's uniqueness, and the fact that it is an interactive story and not just a regular short story. Well Done!
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