The story was overall good, but it had a little problem of ending so sudden. Like what did the girls and they family did before the horde killed their parents, and the horde should not be labelled as evil, but lost their minds and memories, became an uncontrollable beast with only one thing in mind: spreading the infection.
The total of this information is very interesting, but i think you missed a very important topic which is that tons of people died and those deaths made life easier in today’s life. Today, we are suffering from overpopulation, and a lot of population died in the plague so it made life easier now and in the future.
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