This was engaging, and drew me along all the way. I didn't want to stop reading, there were so many things going on. At the same time, I think a view of him before, not just what he wrote, maybe flashes of conversation so we see him before the decision was made. Altogether this was a great read chilling and thought provoking as well.
Damn creepy and well done! I was looking for things to read on Halloween night and this jumped up to the top of my list. You got the creeps and crawls down to an art! I would have liked to have a bit more in the description of the smell, but you could see and feel everything from his point of view. Very well done.
This sounds like our boys, much quieter however when you read it. Read it aloud to one of your biggest fans, and harshest critics as well. Still well loved and looking forward to what comes next. Keep it coming, we will keep reading. You do good work love it!
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