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Rated: E | (4.5)
I find this poem absolutely stunning. The author manages to write so touchingly of the pain of growing older.

And I can't help but think of my great grandmother, who passed away last year. Even though she kept forgetting every day-things, like dinner, and changing her clothes, the memories of her childhood were crystal clear in her mind, all the way to the end. And I remember how sad she was when she realized that her hands had grown so weak, she was unable to knit.

The only thing that I believe could have been done even better is the rythm and the flow, but that's just if i have to point out something. All in all I think it is a really great poem, beautifullyy done.

And I must say, the last line of this poem does it all for me. Great job.
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