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Review Style
I'll be blunt, but I won't be harsh. I don't point out flaws, I point out ways to become even better. If something needs to be said, I'll say it, but I'll be nice about it. My reviews will also be private. If you can't afford the minimum, just email me. I'll be glad to help. I guaruntee reviews at least 2,000 characters long for 2,500 word items.
I'm good at...
I'll be specific when pointing out areas where you can improve your writing. I also provide examples of how to improve. I have an ear for dialogue and phrasing. I specialize in Fantasy and can help with world-building and fleshing out characters.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Science Fiction.
Least Favorite Genres
General Fiction, Romance. Neither have ever held much of an appeal to me, but I won't turn them away.
Favorite Item Types
Static, books
Least Favorite Item Types
Campfires
I will not review...
Erotica. I also will not likely review according to writing.com's timeline. It might even take months, but when I sit down to review something, your work will be on the list of things to review.
Public Reviews
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Review of Imagine  
Review by Orquet
Rated: E | (4.0)
I just wanted to let you know that even if I wrote a story with the same plotline, it'd still be different. Plots don't make a different story. It's the author's voice that makes any story unique. And that is something no one can steal.
Your word choice, (part of your author's voice,) is light, airy, and delicate. It's quite pretty.
One area for improvement is the description. I have no idea what the house looks like. Try weaving in hints.
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