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Rated: E | (4.5)
That was really good! I really enjoyed that! I think (if it's not already) that you should get it published! One somall improvment I would make is to not use such extravagant words. Words like pre-pubescence, and embellish might be hard to understand for many people. You don't want tro confuse your readers. But other than that it was REALLY good!!!
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