I gave you a five rating because I have no criteria for discerning differently.
I like the story, the straightforward telling. Brings to mind the stories we find in Robert Frost's poems: life, real and raw.
Personally, I could do without the lecture at the end, explaining to the reader what he or she should make of the story. I DO understand the need of writers to explain their work.
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