I don't know why, but I kept thinking Boston, not Philly *laugh* Just me, I guess. Meanwhile, what a compelling write; I am so interested to see where you're going to take these two brothers! There were a few technical hiccups, mainly with style, but nothing so jarring it made me want to stop reading. I liked the descriptions of the characters, as well as the bar's atmosphere. I swear I've been in that bar! *laugh* I realize this was posted six years ago, but I certainly hope you get to read my review; I enjoyed this very much and intend to read more. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
-kimmer
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